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Blogs > goodatpoetry2 > Dark Side Of The Moon

--- The Arrival ---  

goodatpoetry2 74M
213 posts
9/16/2016 4:55 am

Last Read:
9/16/2017 10:34 am
--- The Arrival ---
The husband was in a panic, the wife wasn't. " Are you sure that's all we need? ", he asked.
" Yes, dear, we have everything. Why don't you go warm up the car for me and I'll call the doctor and tell him we're on our way to the hospital now ."

It was going to be the Madison's first . When they got to the hospital, their doctor arrived at the same time.

" Almost ready, little lady? ", he asked.
" I think he's really anxious to get out! I might not be ready, but I think he is. "

Later, in the delivery room, the doctor reached in and gently helped with the baby's exit. When the baby was free, he held the up by the feet and sharply spanked the baby to start him breathing.

Blood immediately started running from the doctor's nose and was soon seeping out from both of his eyes and the corner of his mouth. The<b> nurse </font></b>quickly grabbed the .

Before he died, the doctor looked back at the baby in shock.

The baby was crying and his eyes were wide open in anger. He was staring directly at the doctor's face.

HE was here!

And nobody....
NOBODY....
Fucked with HIM!

. . Goodatpoetry2
....... 7-5-1989


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Whatcha think?

goodatpoetry2 74M
16552 posts
9/25/2016 10:50 am
    Quoting LiveLifeDoU:
    Wowzers! Yeah, I had to laugh at this short blip but seriously, just the commercials for The Exorcist scared the crap out of me! This was more funny then scary....much better, imho.
I think it was too short to be really scary. . But as a film short, it could have had a better effect.

Thanks.


LiveLifeDoU 69F  
2199 posts
9/25/2016 5:47 am

 Wowzers! Yeah, I had to laugh at this short blip but seriously, just the commercials for The Exorcist scared the crap out of me! This was more funny then scary....much better, imho.


goodatpoetry2 74M
16552 posts
9/18/2016 10:37 am
    Quoting superbjversion2:
    Was this the inspiration for the movie Damien? I'd love to see what kind of story you could write with this kid as a 2 year old!
Actually, I was thinking about that *Damien* thing myself.

But where could you go from here? It looks like he already owns the world.

Thanks.


superbjversion2 69F  
24388 posts
9/18/2016 9:28 am

 Was this the inspiration for the movie Damien? I'd love to see what kind of story you could write with this kid as a 2 year old!
Opportunity may knock only once, but temptation bangs on the door forever!


goodatpoetry2 74M
16552 posts
9/18/2016 8:25 am
    Quoting  :
Always good to see you around. I'm hoping you stay awhile.

Thanks.


goodatpoetry2 74M
16552 posts
9/17/2016 1:56 am
    Quoting kzoopair:
    That coulda been my uncle Pete. He was five five and a boxer. He didn't put up with any shit from anybody!
He was probably a boxer before he was born, too.
I bet that's what his Mom told everyone.

Thanks.


goodatpoetry2 74M
16552 posts
9/16/2016 4:07 pm
    Quoting tickles4us:
    So you taking up writing horror stories now?
I'm looking at my old notebook, and I wrote that on 7-5-1989, so this isn't ANYTHING new.

Thanks.


tickles4us 62M
7262 posts
9/16/2016 3:36 pm

 So you taking up writing horror stories now?
Vive La Difference


goodatpoetry2 74M
16552 posts
9/16/2016 1:42 pm
    Quoting wickedeasy:
    jesus save us.

    you scared the shit out of me..............
Coming from someone who writes as well as YOU do, that's a real compliment.
Thanks.


wickedeasy 74F
32404 posts
9/16/2016 1:21 pm

 jesus save us.

you scared the shit out of me..............
You cannot conceive the many without the one.


goodatpoetry2 74M
16552 posts
9/16/2016 10:27 am
    Quoting  :
Oh no! I just can't imagine that.
Poor you!

Thanks.


goodatpoetry2 74M
16552 posts
9/16/2016 10:23 am
    Quoting japaneseass:
    that sounds like my daughter...well...she was really ready to come out...and sure she was tough and had spanks, i am surprised she did not bitch slap my doc...and today, she is 21...and still is...haha...poor fiance...
You must have a lot of fun with her over the years.
But at 21, now she's HIS problem.
Thanks.


japaneseass 56F  
50231 posts
9/16/2016 6:19 am

 that sounds like my daughter...well...she was really ready to come out...and sure she was tough and had spanks, i am surprised she did not bitch slap my doc...and today, she is 21...and still is...haha...poor fiance...


goodatpoetry2 74M
16552 posts
9/16/2016 5:00 am

 Scarey?


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